Text in the Wild

For my three bodies of text in the wild, I am starting with my dishwasher manual. I was on the hunt for instructions to fix a faulty door switch.
https://products-salsify.geappliances.com/image/upload/s–69jpGq6s–/d17cda24915df2db44076ef0f0746560e8ec64f1.pdf?_ga=2.77229532.814551085.1732403306-642144137.1732403306

  • Are the learning objectives cognitive in nature?
    • The objectives for the manual were very clear on the installation steps but the troubleshooting sections was very light.
  • Are motion and audio not needed?
    • Motion and audio were not needed because the instructions had a high enough amount of detail to show the different steps.
  • Is the page layout simple and uncluttered?
    • The layout of the page was nice and wide margins on the printed version allow for owner notes to be made.
  • Is a consistent format used, such as all vertical or all horizontal?
    • All pages were consistently formatted to have tall page with two columns of information.
  • When using illustrations or photographs is there consistent formatting and does it support verbal content?
    • Some of the drawings had some forced perspective in use that made it need additional notes explaining what is happening.
  • Has color use been limited and readability emphasized?
    • Readability was focused because of larger font size, use of checklists, and black line drawings.

The second text in the wild was a manual to repair a baler from the late 70s I was helping a coworker get working this fall after buying it at an auction.
https://www.dutchbalerparts.nl/wp-content/uploads/2018/07/IA_IHC_Models_430_440-Baler_1084955_R1_.compressed.pdf

  • Are the learning objectives cognitive in nature?
    • Yes on the opening page it give the scope and range of the document that it is for general maintenance, calibrating, and troubleshooting.
  • Are motion and audio not needed?
    • No, the text is descriptive and references the pictures.
  • Is the page layout simple and uncluttered?
    • No, at first I thought it was using a variation of Cornell notes format with the bulk of the text on the left column with the right column reserved for pictures, diagrams, and supplemental notes. However after a few pages it started to treat it like a two column document and then later the bulk of the information was in the right column with notes in the left.
  • Is a consistent format used, such as all vertical or all horizontal?
    • Everything is vertical and it is evident that it was designed to be printed and not used on screen.
  • When using illustrations or photographs is there consistent formatting and does it support verbal content?
    • Yes, the diagrams and pictures were very good for explaining the steps of the setup and what to look for if making a repair.
  • Has color use been limited and readability emphasized?
    • The cover had color but the rest was black and white. The typeface is easy to read and well spaced.

My third piece of text is on tablet weaving instructions. I took a class on it back during lockdown and now have a student who wants to try it.
https://www.shelaghlewins.com/tablet_weaving/TW01/TW01.htm

  • Are the learning objectives cognitive in nature?
    • Yes, the objectives are studentcentric and have success criteria.
  • Are motion and audio not needed?
    • No but I can see this document being used as the basis of a script to make a video.
  • Is the page layout simple and uncluttered?
    • It is almost sparse in its layout. Headings are used to break up information but because of the design the few pictures that are used cause big breaks in the text.
  • Is a consistent format used, such as all vertical or all horizontal?
    • It is vertical and based on the formatting it is designed to be printed as an offline resource for the learner.
  • When using illustrations or photographs is there consistent formatting and does it support verbal content?
    • Pictures and drawings are a mix they are useable in size and don’t overwhelm the reader with details.
  • Has color use been limited and readability emphasized?
    • Color is limited to a few pictures and the rest is black line drawings. The readability is good but could be improved with some grouping of the text.

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